Friday, 8 March 2019

A Woman without her man ♀

For IWD 2019 let's consider the following:

"A woman ...

            ... without her man ...

                        ... is less than nothing"

At first sight the words appear as chauvinistic text
But without proper punctuation, they lack conviction and context

Let's make a simple change to get #BalanceForBetter
By punctuating the spaces between the words and letters

Add a colon here, a comma there and the macho huffing and puffing

Becomes "A Woman:
                            without her,
                                    man is less than nothing"

© John McDonough

John has been writing poetry for 30 years. His style is urban/performance poetry. He subtitles his spoken word for the benefit of the hard of hearing and those that struggle with dialect, his is Mancunian.