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Saturday, 21 January 2012

Big Ships Still Sink

I saw them once in Naples
those giant cruise liners
lined up along the harbour wall
each like a multi-tiered cake at
an expensive wedding party

Not my kind of ships
more like office blocks
in busy city centres
or hotels in the Middle East
with luxury swimming pools

Someone said the passengers
didn’t always come ashore
“I mean why would they
want to they’ve got
everything they need?”

Their sheer size made
them look invincible
surely no ocean could
be deep enough to
cover them with water

So today with pictures
of Costa Concordia
leaning at twenty degrees
I said a prayer for those
who died and remembered
that big ships still sink
in deep or shallow seas.

© David Subacchi

Cruise captain 'committed errors', say ship's owners
David Subacchi is a civil servant who has been writing poetry seriously for just over a year. He hopes to publish his first English collection in 2012.


  1. How very true your words are David. Not my kind of ship either. Far too tall and narrow, and as we now know, too vulnerable. A sad incident indeed.

    1. Thanks for your comments Little Nell. We have yet to learn the truth about what happened although the media seem quick to jump to all sorts of conclusions!

      David Subacchi